To sit under pines
Breathing in cool river mist —
Lets all the pain go
By Diane E. Dockum
©April 19, 2016
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To sit under pines
Breathing in cool river mist —
Lets all the pain go
By Diane E. Dockum
©April 19, 2016
Marble Hill Press 
Love to see all your writings. One quick thought, “lets all the pain go”
I see what you mean. It changes the command to myself at the end, but makes more sense.